Romeo & Juliet < Korrekturlesen < Englisch < Sprachen < Vorhilfe
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Shakespeares Romeo and Juliet tells us a story of two persons who are children of two hostile families: CAPULETs & MONTAGUEs.
Romeo, a Montague, is on a ball of Capulets, disguised and unknown. There he meets Juliet.
In this scene Romeo takes Juliets hand and talks to her. He doesnt know, that Juliet is a daughter of the Capulets. So Romeo kisses her hand and finds a reason to kiss her lips. So they fall in love with each other. After Romeo had kissed her the second time the nurse tells Juliet that her mother wants to see her. Speaking with the nurse, with the person who nursed Juliet and is closer than her mother to her, Romeo gets to know, that Juliet is a Capulet. Romeo is astonished and he hopelessly leaves the ball.
At this time Juliet also gets to know that Romeo is the unique son of their arch enemy. Juliet is very confused and she goes away with the nurse,
Romeo uses a personification when he says that his lips are pilgrims.
It is also noticeable that after this personification Romeo begins to address Juliet with dear saint. He uses an image to deify Juliet. By saying that his lips are pilgrims who adore the saint Juliet, he makes a relationship between his lips and Juliet, which gives him the opportunity to kiss her. Romeo justifies this kiss by mentioning the tendency of a pilgrim, who looks for release.
Becuase of this, Romeo keeps playing the same game and explains her that now he is free from sin. Juliet mentions that now her lips have the sin they took away from his lips. Thats why I think, that almost the whole dialogue between Romeo and Juliet contains images.
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Wäre nett, wenn ihr so schnell wie möglich antworten würdet...da ich die Antwort für die morgige Klausur brauche!
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(Mitteilung) Reaktion unnötig  | | Datum: | 23:29 Mi 15.11.2006 | | Autor: | Casey16 |
also ich weiß nicht mehr wie die szene genau war, aber ich finde deinen text bischen durcheinander. auch bei "hopelessly leaves", wenn du vorher astonished schreibst. also ka aber da müsstest du bisi auf die zeit acht geben.
"Speaking with the nurse, with the person who nursed Juliet and is closer than her mother to her", also dieses hier versteh ich gar nicht. du musst bedenken das es wie eine erklärung ist. du musst dir vorstellen, dass dein gegenüber keine ahnung hat-
ich denke mal mit contains images, meinst du bestimmt dass die szenen metaphoric sind.
ansonsten sorry aber ich kann dir wohl nicht wirklich helfen.
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(Mitteilung) Reaktion unnötig | | Datum: | 05:25 Fr 17.11.2006 | | Autor: | matux |
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