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(Frage) beantwortet  | | Datum: | 20:59 Do 25.06.2009 | | Autor: | bjoern89 |
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Hallo, ich schreibe morgen ne Englisch arbei.
Wir haben den Film WHAT WOMAN WANT gesehen
darüber wird es ne frage geben. Vielleicht kann mir jemand noch tipps geben, und sich folgenden kleinen text durchlesen.
VIELLEICHT HAT JEMAND DEN FIM JA AUCH GESEHEN UND KANN MIR NOCH EIN PAAR TIPPS GEBEN. FURTHERMORE IT WOULD BE NICELY IF SOMEBODY OF YOU CAN CORRECTED MY LITTLE ESSAY/WRITING TEXT
daaanke!!!
We have learned from the film "What Woman Want" how a advertising company works. It is very important, to work in a team, because 5 heads are better than two. Futhermore it is neccessary to make a presentation to exemplify the campagne to other people.
On the one hand you must have an idea for a prduct - in the film for "Nike" fashion articles, and on the ohter hand it must be excellent designed, because its the first impression of a potential customer - such as in a Nike shop - to buy these articles. this the reason why you must work in a team, because more people have got more different ideas, and the marketing leader has got a bigger choice of one idea or he or she could be compare many ideas to one the finest of them all.
For the customer is only the end product determinding (=entscheidend).
On account of this is is neccessary to make a televison spot to promote the product. For this possibility the advertising capaing must put the slogan of the product - here for "Nike"-shoes, at the end of the spot, because the viewer can be concentrated on the spot...
Finally it is a very stressful job to work in a advertising campain, but if you are a excenllenct business men/women you can earn a lot of many, if the product is well.
FILM:
It is not recommendable that Mel Gibson trys to get the feeling of the woman. Because he make himself farcial that he test woman products.
Recently is is possible for the customer, that the advertiser takes for the commercial spot a woman, especially when it is for a sports product, becuase a woman emanates sexyness - that is for a potential customer important. A nicely look woman can be the incentive to worked for him/herself to have the same body like the woman in the spot.
Ich habe diese Frage auch in folgenden Foren auf anderen Internetseiten gestellt:
http://www.uni-protokolle.de/foren/viewt/238592,0.html?sid=84fe894d46c63077ae9d7a6fa61a57f7
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(Antwort) fertig  | | Datum: | 12:37 Fr 26.06.2009 | | Autor: | M.Rex |
> Bitte korrektur lesen
> Hallo, ich schreibe morgen ne Englisch arbei.
> Wir haben den Film WHAT WOMAN WANT gesehen
> darüber wird es ne frage geben. Vielleicht kann mir jemand
> noch tipps geben, und sich folgenden kleinen text
> durchlesen.
Hallo
>
> VIELLEICHT HAT JEMAND DEN FIM JA AUCH GESEHEN UND KANN MIR
> NOCH EIN PAAR TIPPS GEBEN. FURTHERMORE IT WOULD BE NICELY
> IF SOMEBODY OF YOU CAN CORRECTED MY LITTLE ESSAY/WRITING
> TEXT
> daaanke!!!
By the movie "What woman want" Wwe have learned from the film "What Woman Want" how an advertising company worksoperates. It is very important, to work in a team, because 5 heads are better than two. Futhermore it is neccessary to make a presentation to exemplify the campagne to other people.
On the one hand you must have an idea for a product - in the filmmovie for "Nike" fashion articles, and on the ohter hand it must be excellent designed, because its the first impression of a potential customer - such as in a Nike shop - to buy these articles. This the reason why So you must work in a team, because more people have got more different ideas, and the marketing leader has got a bigger choice of one idea or he or she could be compare many ideas to one the finest of them all. Das schreib bitte mal anders
For the customer is only the end product is determindingedbesser wäre aber "important"
On account of this ist is neccessary to make a televison spot to promote the product. For this possibility the advertising campaing must put the slogan of the product - here for "Nike"-shoes,_ at the end of the spot, because the viewer can be concentrated on the spot...
Finally it is a very stressful job to work in a advertising campain, but if you are a excenllenct business men/women you can earn a lot of manymoney, if the product is wellgood.
FILM:
It is not recommendable that Mel Gibson trys to get the feeling of the woman. Because he make himself farcial Was meinst du damit? "farcical=lächerlich" that he test woman products.
Recently is is possible for the customer, that the advertiser takes for the commercial spot a woman, especially when it is for a sports product, becuase a woman emanates sexyness - that is important for a potential customer important. A nicely look nice-looking woman can be the incentive to worked for him/herself to have the same body like the woman in the spot??.
Das ganze sind nur Anregungen und die Fehler, die ich gefunden habe, sind z.T. auch Flüchtigkeitsfehler.
Marius
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