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(Frage) beantwortet  | | Datum: | 11:56 Sa 14.11.2009 | | Autor: | Dinker |
Hallo
Ich wäre nochmals sehr dankbar um Korrektur
At the end of the presentation you will be able to answer question....why does the earth gets hotter and hotter? Why is the greenhouse effect such essential? Why does the ice in tha antarctis melt? How does we can stop global warming ?
Now I will compare the temperature of the two bottles. As you can see the bottle with the cutout has a lower temperature than the unprepared bottle. The reason for the temperature difference is, that the in this bottle the lamp light stay into the bottle.
Vielen Dnak
Gruss DInker
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Hallo Dinker!
Dein Text gefällt mir bis auf einige Kleinigkeiten ganz gut. Schaue dir insbesondere noch einmal die Frage 2.) an; ich denke deren Inhalt hattest du noch nicht richtig erfasst. Mein Verbesserungsvorschlag lautet jedenfalls:
At the end of the presentation, you should be able to answer the following questions:
1.) Why does the global temperature increase, permanently?
2.) Why should we not stop coping with the greenhouse effect?
3.) Why does the ice in the Antarctic melt?
4.) How can we stop the global warming process?
Now, I would like to compare the temperature of these bottles. As you can feel, the bottle possessing the cutout has a lower temperature than the unprepared one. Those bottle, having the heat radiating light inside their hollow, absorbs much more warmth, consequently.
Gruß, Marcel
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